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The final Halloween story features Jaune having a bad experience at the Halloween dance. Or so he thinks. One thing's for sure, not all things are what they seem though.

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Not sure why this didn't show up the first time, but here it is again.

I really enjoyed reading this, particularly the all the little details of the belly as it bounced and jiggled, or how Jaunes struggles only seemed to bring GrimPyhrra pleasure. I was kind of half expecting for the normal Phyrra to appear, maybe after Grim Phyrra walked Jaune out of the party or even have Jaune find her already waiting inside GrimPhyrra's second stomach.

On another note, please tell you you plan to have a Swalloween chapter mainly featuring Velvet this year? I'm pretty sure all we had of our favorite bunny girl last year was a brief mentioning in a Dustmas story before getting eaten by Nora. I really think the girl is overdue for a story showing off her pure predatory nature. Maybe have something showing Velvet and Coco going around eating trick-or-treaters, or something.

In all honesty, I just what an excuse to read about Velvet stuffing herself to inhumanly large levels and lugging around a belly larger then herself as she tries finding somewhere she can relax as she digests her many meals. Please tell me something like that is in the works!